The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008 (%). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart provides information about the three most popular problems among city residents in seven
cities
in the UK in 2008.
Overall
, health
services
were the highest reported issue
in all cities
, except Glasgow
in which education and training were the most reported concern in 2008.
Looking at the data in more detail, in 2008, Belfast and Cardiff were the cities
where health
services
were the most problem experienced by their citizens, accounting for about 59% and 58% respectively. This
was followed by other cities
such
as Newcastle, Birmingham, Manchester and London, where problems related to health
services
accounted for more than half of the total. Meanwhile, in Glasgow
, health
services
issue
was less than 50% of the total.
Education and training were the second most common issue
for the city residents in 6 major cities
excluding Glasgow
. Indeed, More than half of the people in Glasgow
had issues with education and training, making it the biggest living issue
in that City.
Finally
, the third common issue
was air pollution which comprised more than 10% of the total living issue
in Cardiff, Manchester, and London. In contrast
, in the other four cities
, air pollution contributed to less than 10% of living issues reported by their residents.Submitted by irarahmawati.polkesma on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cities, health, services, issue, glasgow with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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