The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008 (%). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart provides information about the three most popular problems among city residents in seven
cities
in the UK in 2008.
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Overall
, Linking Words
health
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services
were the highest reported Use synonyms
issue
in all Use synonyms
cities
, except Use synonyms
Glasgow
in which education and training were the most reported concern in 2008.
Looking at the data in more detail, in 2008, Belfast and Cardiff were the Use synonyms
cities
where Use synonyms
health
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services
were the most problem experienced by their citizens, accounting for about 59% and 58% respectively. Use synonyms
This
was followed by other Linking Words
cities
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such
as Newcastle, Birmingham, Manchester and London, where problems related to Linking Words
health
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services
accounted for more than half of the total. Meanwhile, in Use synonyms
Glasgow
, Use synonyms
health
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services
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issue
was less than 50% of the total.
Education and training were the second most common Use synonyms
issue
for the city residents in 6 major Use synonyms
cities
excluding Use synonyms
Glasgow
. Indeed, More than half of the people in Use synonyms
Glasgow
had issues with education and training, making it the biggest living Use synonyms
issue
in that City.
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Finally
, the third common Linking Words
issue
was air pollution which comprised more than 10% of the total living Use synonyms
issue
in Cardiff, Manchester, and London. Use synonyms
In contrast
, in the other four Linking Words
cities
, air pollution contributed to less than 10% of living issues reported by their residents.Use synonyms
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cities, health, services, issue, glasgow with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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