The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008 (%). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008 (%).

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.  

Write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart provides information about the three most popular problems among city residents in seven
cities
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in the UK in 2008.
Overall
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,
health
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services
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were the highest reported
issue
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in all
cities
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, except
Glasgow
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in which education and training were the most reported concern in 2008. Looking at the data in more detail, in 2008, Belfast and Cardiff were the
cities
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where
health
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services
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were the most problem experienced by their citizens, accounting for about 59% and 58% respectively.
This
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was followed by other
cities
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such
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as Newcastle, Birmingham, Manchester and London, where problems related to
health
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services
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accounted for more than half of the total. Meanwhile, in
Glasgow
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,
health
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services
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issue
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was less than 50% of the total. Education and training were the second most common
issue
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for the city residents in 6 major
cities
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excluding
Glasgow
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. Indeed, More than half of the people in
Glasgow
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had issues with education and training, making it the biggest living
issue
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in that City.
Finally
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, the third common
issue
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was air pollution which comprised more than 10% of the total living
issue
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in Cardiff, Manchester, and London.
In contrast
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, in the other four
cities
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, air pollution contributed to less than 10% of living issues reported by their residents.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cities, health, services, issue, glasgow with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • significant issue
  • high percentage
  • real estate market
  • traffic congestion
  • transportation issues
  • urban areas
  • health services
  • dissatisfaction
  • healthcare facilities
  • crime rates
  • safety
  • law enforcement
  • education and employment issues
  • job market
  • educational systems
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