Write a letter to cafeteria you use. Express your satisfaction tell about boring food give suggestions
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm writing to you regarding my experience in your cafe that I attended yesterday. Despite the advertisement I saw on the internet that offered mixed music and cuisine
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, loud music makes me and my companions leave earlier.
Another point of my feedback is the poor diversity of meals that were offered that day. The menu had chicken-based meals with only two available garnishes potato and rice. All food had an ordinary and plain taste that had premises of burnt oil.
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, here are some points to improve in order to increase customer satisfaction. Correct your spelling
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Firstly
, it would be great to add some meat and vegetable dishes to your menu for customers with different preferences. Linking Words
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, adjust music of other genres to playlists and the same time install a better sound system, as low-quality speakers aggravate visitors.
Hope my comments will have a positive effect on your business.
Yours sincerely,
Johnny SinsLinking Words
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