The graph gives information about drinking habits of the US population by age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph gives information about drinking habits of the US population by age.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates information about the citizens of the US with drinking habits by
age
group.
Overall
, the number of people who never drink stays constant, slightly decreasing for the elderly people. Another key point is the major increase in elderly people who quit drinking,
also
young adults seem to be light drinkers. The percentage of non-drinkers stays around 60-55% for all
age
groups
except for the
age
group that has 65-74 which has decreased to 45%.The most significant feature is the increase in the ex-drinkers,
while
for young adults and ,adults the percentage stays around 5-10%, for the senior citizen with the
age
groups
55-64 and 65-74 has increased to 25% respectively 40%. There is
also
the constancy of the light drinkers for the
age
groups
16-24 and 25-34 that has around 25%-35% and decreased for the other
age
groups
. There is
also
a slight increase for the heavy drinkers for the
age
groups
of 35-44 and 45-54 with over a 10% than the other
age
groups
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Drinking habits
  • Population demographics
  • Age group/bracket
  • Alcohol consumption
  • Frequency of drinking
  • Heavy drinking
  • Moderate drinking
  • Teetotaler
  • Legal drinking age
  • Societal norms
  • Trends over time
  • Underage drinking
  • Alcohol abuse
  • Health implications
  • Statistical data
  • Comparative analysis
  • Bar chart/Line graph
  • Binge drinking
  • Responsibility in drinking
  • Age-specific patterns
  • Cross-generational comparison
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