Fewer young people play sports these days. Why is this? What can be done to encourage more young people to do sports?
Nowadays, globally, it has been noticed that a large amount of migration is happening from the villages to the big towns. People are moving in search of a better and the sustainable life for their families. If we look at the bigger picture,
this
does not look like very constructive development because the Linking Words
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the rural areas are struggling through a shortage of labour for their daily tasks.
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due to
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population
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population
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Moreover
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cities
are being impacted for constructing the new homes and roads in every corner of the Use synonyms
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, shortages of resources like water and electricity are rising in the metropolis areas. Bangalore, a city from south India, Linking Words
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, villages are facing inadequate workforce issues Linking Words
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the fact mentioned above. Linking Words
Although
many developing countries still depend upon rural farming as their vital source of earning, their governments seem reluctant towards improving the progressive balance between the urban Linking Words
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regions
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Therefore
, the quality of farm products from these Linking Words
regions
is decreasing slowly. The Times article from Dec 2022, Use synonyms
for example
, has deduced that there will be a large impact on the quantity and quality of food that the Linking Words
world
eats in the next decade if villagers keep moving out from their native places.
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To conclude
, mankind needs progress at every stage of their life, and to accomplish Linking Words
this
they are moving away from their lands. A large part of society moves towards the metropolis Linking Words
regions
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such
cases. Now, Linking Words
due to
many people's migration, the Linking Words
cities
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population
and the villages are facing issues with their quality of output.Use synonyms
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