Many people believe that television programs are no value for children. Do you agree? Why and why not? Provide reasons and examples to support your response.
Television
has been
the most Wrong verb form
is
disccion
topic Correct your spelling
discussed
amonge
all people,some people Correct your spelling
among
thinks
that Change the verb form
think
television
programs
are a
harmful Change the article
apply
for
Change preposition
to
children
. I totally disagree with this
statement because television
has both sides of benificient ana a
harmful point for kids.Correct article usage
apply
This
essay will discuss the harmful and positive of watching television
for children
.
First and foremost , there are many benefits that can children
gain it
from watching Correct pronoun usage
apply
television
, first they
can watch many educational Capitalize word
They
programe
as Correct your spelling
programmes
it
teach them a new language .Correct pronoun usage
they
For example
; children
are able to gain easy
Correct your spelling
ease
of
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in
diffrent
Correct your spelling
different
language
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languages
through
watching a series of foreign languages.Change preposition
by
In addition
, it may learn
them many moral Verb problem
teach
behaviour
especially kids Change to a plural noun
behaviours
likes
to do what other Replace the word
like
childrens
do.Correct your spelling
children
On the other
hand
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,hand
television
consider
one of the Wrong verb form
is considered
technology
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technologies
can
socilise Correct pronoun usage
that can
families member
so Fix the agreement mistake
family members
childrens
will find time to Correct your spelling
children
seat
with their Verb problem
sit
parent
.
Fix the agreement mistake
parents
However
, there are a
harmful effects of Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
television
on children
, firt they
may Capitalize word
They
watching
unfamiliar Wrong verb form
watch
programs
which
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that
leran
them violence and other bad Correct your spelling
teach
value
.Fix the agreement mistake
values
For example
;alot
of Correct your spelling
a lot
childrem
become violent just Correct your spelling
children
beacuse
they doing what they watching Correct your spelling
because
from
Change preposition
on
television
.Also
it Add a comma
,Also
consider
as gaining Wrong verb form
is considered
of
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apply
a
bad behaviour and morality which leads him to criminal and other negativity.
In conclusion, I disagree that Remove the article
apply
television
programs
are bad influences or provide no value to children
because not all television
programs
are bad and many television
programs
share positive morals and values that can help children
to develop themselves. In addition
, to mitigate the bad influence from television
programs
, I would recommend parents to supervise their children
while
watching television
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