You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
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letter to request you for another
room
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.The girl with whom I am sharing my
room
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currently is giving me a very hard time,
beacuse
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because
she is
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a very
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very
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unorganized and
unhygine
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hygiene
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person. It has been two months
that
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I never saw her
cleaning
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the
room
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especially
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her side, now
the
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whole
room
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stinks and
made
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makes it
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difficult to stay.
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, she and her friends almost stay at late night
everyday
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doing parties in the
room
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which not only
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affects
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my
stuides
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studies
but
also
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my health. I have suggested
her
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she
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to
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clean
as well as
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to
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do parties out of the
room
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, but she's never
get
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bothered to change her lifestyle. Would you kindly provide me a
room
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with
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a quite
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quite
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quiet
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room
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where I can focus on my study and health
.
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I have no problem
in
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apply
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sharing the
room
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until and unless the next person is cooperative, as I have shared the
room
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before, and I never give a chance to anybody to complain. I look forward to hearing from you.
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sincerely Akankasha
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accommodation officer
  • roommate
  • share a room
  • living arrangement
  • difficult to work
  • noise levels
  • study environment
  • privacy concerns
  • alternative accommodation
  • single room
  • academic performance
  • well-being
  • respectfully request
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