The graph gives information about drinking habits of the US population by age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
provided line graph illustrates the percentage
of people in the USA based on two factors age and drinking habits. Overall
, it can be seen that never-drinkers humankind represented the highest ratio among adolescents, whereas
the greatest percentage
among the elderly was for ex-drinkers.
To begin
, generally, the percentage
of the never-drinkers population decreased as the age increased because it started, at 60% for adolescents of 16 years
old and stopped, at around 43% for the elderly, at 65 years
old. In addition
to that, the light drinker proportion of inhabitants reduced gradually when the ages elevated, as; it accounted for about 20%, at 16 years
old, and then
, it dropped to around 10%, at 65 years
old.
Furthermore
, however
, the ratio of heavy drinkers and ex-drinkers folks experienced fluctuation, the percentage
of heavy drinkers was about 5%, at 16 and reduced to around 3%, at 65, but the proportion of ex-drinkers was about 10%, at 16 and elevated to around 50%, at age 65, which was more than 10 times over heavy drinkers.Submitted by sm710129 on
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