the graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The chart compares four Asian countries in terms of the
proportion
of people who live in cities from 1970 to 2020 and predictions of it for 2030 and 2040.
Overall
, all the
four countries have a growth in the Correct article usage
apply
percentage
of the population living in cities in the past 50 years and the percentage
will go on increasing till 2040.
Looking at the details, in 1970, there were about 30 percent of people living in urban area
in Malaysia, Fix the agreement mistake
areas
while
Philippines
had a a larger Correct article usage
the Philippines
proportion
of 32%. There were only 18% citizens
in Thailand and 14% in Indonesia in 1970. After exceeding the Change preposition
of citizens
percentage
of population in Philippines
in 1980 and falling back to the second rank in 1990, the Correct article usage
the Philippines
proportion
in Malaysia grew significantly to be top-ranked and will become 85% in 2040. The percentage
in Philippines
, Correct article usage
the Philippines
however
, began to fall in 2000. After a reverse when it dropped into
40% in 2010, it continued rising and is predicted to be 50% in 2040.
Change preposition
to
Although
Indonesia took the least
Correct word choice
lowest
proportion
in 1970, it has
increased significantly in the following 50 years. It exceeded Thailand and Unnecessary verb
apply
Philippines
in 2000 and 2010 separately, predicted to reach a new top in2040,which is 63% . There was a Correct article usage
the Philippines
fluctuate
in the Replace the word
fluctuation
proportion
of citizens in Thailand between 1990 and 2020. It was 30% and in 2040 it tend
to rise to 48%.Change the verb form
tends
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Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, percentage, philippines with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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