You are having problems with a neighbour’s animals because the fence between your properties is old and In poor repair. You want the neighbour to pay half the cost of building a new fence. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter •say what the problems are •explain how a new fence will solve the problems • suggest that the neighbour pays half of the cost

Dear Ms Black, I am writing to inform you about a problem which recently occurred. Your pet came to my garden through the
fence
and damaged my garden furniture yesterday. I hadn’t realised before that the
fence
which separates our field was very damaged until
this
issue happened. The
fence
is covered by a hedge from both sides,
therefore
, it is not easy to recognise the existing situation. As we are all aware
this
block needs to be renewed. We haven’t done any repairs for ages.
However
, I believe that our problem couldn’t be solved with a simple repair.
This
cost would be the same as the new
fence
cost.
Moreover
, I think
this
won’t affect our limited budget. I hope you will agree that we have it renewed as soon as possible with a shared cost. I don’t want to any more damage to my garden furniture
due to
your dog.
This
gives my budget much more hazard.
Additionally
, I kindly request
to
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make a temporary solution to avoid your
pet
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entrance to my area. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon, Best Regards, Jane
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