You are having problems with a neighbour’s animals because the fence between your properties is old and In poor repair. You want the neighbour to pay half the cost of building a new fence. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter •say what the problems are •explain how a new fence will solve the problems • suggest that the neighbour pays half of the cost

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Dear Ms Black, I am writing to inform you about a problem which recently occurred. Your pet came to my garden through the

fence

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and damaged my garden furniture yesterday. I hadn’t realised before that the

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which separates our field was very damaged until

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issue happened. The

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is covered by a hedge from both sides,

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, it is not easy to recognise the existing situation. As we are all aware

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block needs to be renewed. We haven’t done any repairs for ages.

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, I believe that our problem couldn’t be solved with a simple repair.

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cost would be the same as the new

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cost.

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, I think

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won’t affect our limited budget. I hope you will agree that we have it renewed as soon as possible with a shared cost. I don’t want to any more damage to my garden furniture

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your dog.

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gives my budget much more hazard.

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, I kindly request

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make a temporary solution to avoid your

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entrance to my area. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon, Best Regards, Jane

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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6 paragraphs

188 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

property boundary
shared responsibility
mutual benefit
current fencing
deteriorated
construct a new fence
enhance security
prevent trespassing
fair contribution
equitable solution
collaborate
long-term investment
maintenance expenses

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