The map below shows 2 possible sites (S1 and S2) of a new supermarket planned for the town of GARLSDON.
The given diagram presents the development of two
site
named S1 and S2 of Change to a plural noun
sites
new
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the new
a new
supermarket
for GARLSDON town
.
It can be seen that ,
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site
S1 of supermarket
is estimated to build Add an article
the supermarket
a supermarket
in
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on
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the north
north east
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northeast
side
of town
which is Correct article usage
the countrside
countrside
.The north and south Correct your spelling
countryside
sidee
are reserved for housing. We can see thatCorrect your spelling
sides
side
,
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indusrties
will be Correct your spelling
industries
buit
in Correct your spelling
built
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the center
center
of the Change the spelling
centre
town
of GARLSDON which almost cover half of the town
area. From the
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apply
site
S1 there will be railways and main roads side
by side
. supermarket
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Supermarket
site
S1 will built in between railways and main roads. Main
road is 12 km to Hindon Change the article
The main
town
from S1
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the S1
supermarket
.
On the contrary
, site
S2 supermall will be built in the middle of town
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the town
center
as there is no traffic zone .supermall Change the spelling
centre
site
S2 will 16
km from Add a missing verb
be 16
bransdon
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Bransdon
town
which has 15,000 of
people and 25 Change preposition
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kilometers
from Change the spelling
kilometres
cransdon
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Cransdon
town
in
which 29000 Change preposition
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populatin
lives.S2 Correct your spelling
population
site
of supermarket
will be covered by industrial areas around. The main railway crossing passes by Add an article
the supermarket
a supermarket
site
numer
two.Correct your spelling
number
This
is the exact same railway from site
S1 .
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Overall
Over all
, One Correct your spelling
Overall
site
S1 will be built in
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on
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the country
country
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countryside
side
of town
whereas
site
S2 will be built in Add an article
the center
center
of Change the spelling
centre
town
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words site, supermarket, town, side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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