The line graph below shows the average temperatures of three Afrecan cities through the year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the average temperatures of three Afrecan cities through the year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph depicts how the average
temperatures
change in three African cities over the year.
Overall
, Cairo has by far the most dramatic temperature differences,
while
the rest of the two cities have relatively stable climates. It is noticeable that there is a significant upward trend in Cairo from 19 to 35
degrees
Celsius
in five months between January and June,
then
the temperature levels off for two months, until August,
whereas
, it starts coming cooler season from the end of August. There is a steady decrease from
then
on from 34
degrees
Celsius
in September to 21
degrees
Celsius
in December. Compared to Cairo, the figure for Nairobi witnesses relatively moderate climate conditions throughout the year, beginning at 26
degrees
Celsius
in January and reaching a peak at 27
degrees
Celsius
in March, from
then
on decreasing slowly to the bottom at 22
degrees
Celsius
in July and having their coldest seasons
last
for only one month. After that season, people in Nairobi have warmer conditions again, the
temperatures
continuously rise up to 27
degrees
Celsius
in October,
although
the numbers are back and forth for the rest of the period. In terms of Cape Town, the
temperatures
steadily decline from 29
degrees
Celsius
in February to 20
degrees
Celsius
in June after having the hottest month in the year in February. Once the
temperatures
hit the bottom out in June, they remain unchanged for three months,
then
gradually have hotter seasons again. In summary,
according to
the data given, the three regions' temperature changes are drastic, it depends on where the locations are, whether the south hemisphere, north hemisphere or near the equator areas, impact these areas' climate.
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