A friend is planning to visit the town where you live. Write a letter to make some suggestions about The best time to visit your town The most interesting places to check out Where to find inexpensive accommodation

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Dear Sam, Hope everything good at your end. I just received your letter, so excited to know about your next travel plan to my city Ahmedabad. As you know the city has a very hot climate during summer. By considering the weather visiting from November to January is best suitable. It is the festive season during time which will be very enjoyable for your family. Ahmedabad is a diverse city, where you can enjoy both historical and modern culture. Being a history lover it will be enjoyable for you to visit famous sites like Shaking Minarets and Shidi Shaiyad mosque.

Secondly

,you can

also

visit the River Front. You mentioned your concerns about comfortable and cheap accommodations. The town has various options.

However

, during the season most hotels remain booked, so it is advisable to book prior. You can check some online sources. If your family and you are ok

then

you can stay at my home too. I am so excited to see you here very soon. Write back, if you need any

further

advice. And do not forget to tell your date of arrival. Yours lovingly, Jen

Submitted by jaimini2000 on Tue Aug 29 2023

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