Write a letter to your friend and ask him recipe to cook for a party that you are giving in your home. -tell him why you are having a party -tell him why you need a specific recipe -invite your friend to the party

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Dear Manpreet, I hope you are doing well. I am very glad to inform you that it's my son's Avijot birthday on the 16th of October and we have organized a party at our home with some close friends and relatives. I am considering preparing the white sauce pasta you made on your anniversary. It was very yummy and delicious. So, I

also

want to give it a try on that special occasion and for that, I will need its recipe.

Therefore

, I want you to give me the recipe in detail with the measurement of ingredients. I

also

want to invite you to the party

along with

your family and want you to have pasta made by me and give your feedback. I look forward to hearing from you. See you at the party. Best Regards, Sonia

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

138 words

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Write a letter to your friend and ask him recipe to cook for a party that you are giving in your home. -tell him why you are having a party -tell him why you need a specific recipe -invite your friend to the party

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

some people say that main environmental problems of our time are due to lack of some specific species of plants and animals. Other says that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is a problem about a traffic on roads around the world. It is undeniable that transportation by the car has become an essential part of our life. However, these days it become much difficult and create a traffic jam.

Some people think that government should change they way individual live, while others believe that they should choose the way themselves. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.

The graphic indicates the gender ratio of teachers in six kinds of UK education in 2010.