The map below is of the town of kawton.a new mall is planned for the town.The map shows the two possible sites , A and B . Summarise the information by selectiand reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevnt.
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The provided map illustrates the proposed
of
two sites A and Change preposition
apply
B
for new
Bazar in Correct article usage
the new
kawton
.The population of Change the capitalization
Kawton
this
town
about
200.000.Add a missing verb
is about
Overall
,it can be clearly notest
that Correct your spelling
noted
site
B
is surrounded by many
housing Correct word choice
apply
while
site
A located between railway
and Correct article usage
the railway
roadway
.
Looking at Correct article usage
the roadway
map
in more Add an article
the map
details
, Fix the agreement mistake
detail
site
A which
is Correct pronoun usage
apply
locates
near Wrong verb form
located
to
Batad airport and Change preposition
apply
it
has Correct pronoun usage
apply
population
Add an article
a population
about
4 million.The Change preposition
of about
site
located
in the eastern north of the Add a missing verb
is located
town
between Correct article usage
the rail
rail way
and Correct your spelling
railway
Correct article usage
the motor
motor way
.Correct your spelling
motorway
In addition
, it is located neaxt
to Correct your spelling
near
country side
.
Correct your spelling
countryside
On the other hand
,the
Correct article usage
apply
site
B
located
near to Add a missing verb
is located
sea
, Add an article
the sea
however
the mall view will be Add the comma(s)
,however
attracted
.What is more, it Replace the word
attractive
surrounded
by housing,Add a missing verb
is surrounded
town
Correct article usage
the town
center
and Change the spelling
centre
countryside
which Correct article usage
the countryside
located
in the west of the Add a missing verb
is located
town
.However
, the site
accessible
by Add a missing verb
is accessible
long
railway.It is close to the port Correct article usage
a long
however
the population in this
town
about
9.000 which conder lower than Add a missing verb
is about
site
A , It is a
quite far from Dumalag Correct article usage
apply
abot
15 min.Correct your spelling
about
As well
Rephrase
Also
the
Correct article usage
apply
site
B
is more appropriate of constructed
a new mall because it is surrounded by residential Change preposition
for constructing
area
and Fix the agreement mistake
areas
countryside
which enable people to easy making shopping from the market .Correct article usage
the countryside
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words b, town, site with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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