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It is better to buy just a few expensive clothes rather than lots of cheap clothes.

#clothes #lots
The fashion industry takes a special place in the modern world. I am inclined to agree with
this
 certain segment that it is worth purchasing a few dresses which meet with high cost as compared with lots of
clothes
 at a low price.
This
 essay is to discuss my perspectives, which will elaborate on in forthcoming paragraphs. First and foremost, people tend to buy a few expensive
clothes
 because they have good quality,
as a result
 of
this
, they can keep long-lasting. Sometimes, even after several washes, individuals can able to wear
such
clothes
 as a new one.
In addition
 to
this
, the clothing items do not make any discolouration or any patches as compared to the cheapest
clothes
.
For example
, in Sri Lankan local market has several
clothes
, which are met at low prices with different materials and different brands but they make several patches after the first wash.
Therefore
, I believe that buying high-cost clothing has several benefits rather than buying cheaper
clothes
.
Moreover
, people who have huge collections of
clothes
 at low prices that person will
become
Verb problem
go
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 crazy because they are unable to select which is the best for their occasions. Even though people who have limited stores meet at high prices of
clothes
, they always try to match each other and they create nice outfits.
Furthermore
, the person is wearing expensive clothing products to show their wealth and status of family background in the community. In conclusion, I think that buying a few expensive
clothes
 is better than buying
clothes
 at the lowest price. I agree with the formers' view because expensive
clothes
 have good quality and
also
 they create a man who is decently present in the community.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainability
  • long-lasting
  • cost-per-wear
  • economical
  • investing
  • ethical manufacturing
  • transparent
  • exclusivity
  • designs
  • mass-produced
  • accessibility
  • budget
  • fast fashion
  • trends
  • maintenance
  • dry cleaning
  • social status
  • psychological implications
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