The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
The diagram reveals nine main steps for recycling
plastic
. Overall
, recycling plastic
commences with discarding the plastic
bottles into the garbage, and ending with producing new products such
as shirts, plastic
bags, some plastic
vessels, and pencils.
In the first step, a person throws away bottles into the box of recycling garbage. After that, all plastic
waste materials
are sent to the recycling factories by trucks. Next plastic
materials
are sorted based on types and whether they are useful for recycling or not in the recycling centre. It is noteworthy that a huge volume of plastic
bottles is compressed into a block. Then
the block is crushed by two sharp rollers. Next stage, small pieces of plastic
enter into a tanker of water and are washed carefully.
After washing all the pieces of plastic
, a device produces plastic
pellets, and then
the produced pellets are heated to form raw materials
. Before producing products such
as some types of cloth such
as shirts, plastic
vessels, plastic
bags, and pencils, raw materials
are packed.Submitted by behzad.tahmouresi on
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