The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The provided diagram illustrates information about

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in public library floor plan from 20 years to

present

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, the library

have

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many

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technical machines

such

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as kiosks and computers

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than past.

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, employee's

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room

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was decreasing and

vistors

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visitors

rest place was increasing. In detail,

information

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the information

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desk (past : enquiry desk )

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was smaller than 20 years ago.

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, the

room

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changed the cafe.

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children's

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book part was smaller too. The

room

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replaced

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room

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. And,

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CDs

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room

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changed events

room

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. The

room

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had storytelling events place and

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sofas.

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children's

fiction books part on

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side. In

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addition

, the

library

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middle hall had

table

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tables

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and chairs

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20 years ago. But, they

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cleaning.

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adults

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fiction books part moved right side behind

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, the place

becomed

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become

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, it has all

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reference

books.

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reading

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the reading

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room

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changed

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compter

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computer

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words room with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 3 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

158 words

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floor plan
public library
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reading area
computer station
multimedia section
children's area
reference section
study cubicles
shelving units
digital media
technological advancements
user behavior
accessibility
traffic flow
modernization
community needs
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