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In the future all cars, buses, and trucks will be driveless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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These days, because of the advent of technology, the transportation industry has changed. In the future, numerous types of
vehicles
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 as buses, cars, and so forth will be
driverless
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, and the only individuals
traveling
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 inside them will be passengers. I strongly believe that despite some virtues of
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vehicles
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 as being used for disabled
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, and individuals enjoying their trips, some dangers
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 as lack of connection to the main internet service in adverse weather, and drivers losing their
jobs
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 should be taken into account. To commence,
driverless
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vehicles
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 have some upsides for
people
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 who decide to use these
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 for commuting or
traveling
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.
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, some
people
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 especially disabled
people
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 suffer from driving
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, and they often have difficulties
traveling
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 from one place to another place, because, in most
vehicles
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, there are not any places for these
people
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 to drive.
Driverless
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vehicles
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 give these
people
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 opportunities to experience the satisfaction of their lives.
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, when
people
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 do not drive during their trip, they enjoy their trip by watching the spectacular views of nature, and
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 the former drivers can converse with their families or friends during their
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 which can be useful for them to have a delightful experience. On the flip side, using
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vehicles
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 has some drawbacks, especially during adverse conditions,
People
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 who are drivers lose their
jobs
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, and they might have difficulties even meeting their needs.
Driverless
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vehicles
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 work with the internet, and when the connection between these
vehicles
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 and the main service is interrupted by adverse weather, the life of all passengers is prone to danger.
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, the reliance on these
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 is always a controversial topic for passengers.
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, nowadays, some
people
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 work with
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, and driving is a job for
people
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 who supply their basic goods. With the increasing number of
driverless
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vehicles
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, these
people
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 lose their
jobs
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, and they have problems even meeting their needs. In conclusion,
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driverless
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vehicles
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 have some advantages for
people
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such
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 as experiencing a sense of satisfaction and joy, some disadvantages
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 weather conditions and losing
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 of
people
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 should be considered. I firmly believe that in the future
people
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 will perceive both benefits and drawbacks.
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