The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The line graph shows the
emission
of carbon dioxide in 4 European countries in the year
from 1967 to 2007. The mission of Co2 is recorded per individual.
From the available details in the graph, it shows that during these 50 years emission
of Co2 in Correct article usage
the emission
UK
and Correct article usage
the UK
Sweden
has reduced, while
in Italy and Portugal
it has increased.
Actually, the secretion of carbon dioxide in Italy was only Add a comma
,Portugal
fraction
above 4 metric Correct article usage
a fraction
tonnes
in year
1967,but within Change the article
the year
decade
it Add an article
a decade
raised
above 6 metric Verb problem
rose
tonnes
and gained value
of 2 metric Correct article usage
a value
tonnes
per 10 years. After that production of Co2 continued at constant
rate and by the Add an article
a constant
year
2007 this
value was closed
to 8 metric Replace the word
close
tonnes
. Almost similar behaviour was showed
by the Change the form of the verb
shown
emission
of Co2 in Portugal, where CO2 secretion was below 2 metric tons in the year
1967 and with continuous increase it reached to
above 5 metric Change preposition
apply
tonnes
in 2007.
On the other hand
, emission
of this
particular gas showed opposite
behaviour in Correct article usage
the opposite
UK
and Correct article usage
the UK
Sweden
compared to Italy and Portugal. In UK
and Correct article usage
the UK
Sweden
, emission
of Co2 was at Correct article usage
the emission
peak
Correct article usage
a peak
by
11 and 9 metric Change preposition
of
tonnes
respectively in 1967. But after that
it started declining in Add a comma
,that
UK
and in Correct article usage
the UK
Sweden
it jumped to about 10 metric Add a comma
,Sweden
ton
by 1977. After 1977 the Fix the agreement mistake
tons
emission
of Co2 in both UK
and Sweden
decreased tremendously and in year
2007 Change the article
the year
this
emission
was 9 and 5 metric tonnes
in UK
and Sweden
.
Overall
, it displays that due to
certain safety Fix the agreement mistake
actions
action
the Add a comma
,action
emission
of Co2
is reduced in two countries and it has increased in Correct your spelling
CO2
other
two nations.Correct article usage
the other
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