The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram provides information concerning the steps and methods to make
water
clean drinking water
.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that there are 3 stages of production. Commencing with pouring water
into a plastic barrel and culminating in releasing water
by the tap for consumption.
To begin
with, there are several steps to produce the clear water
. The first and most essential step is that the plastic barrel with 3 preferred elements inside which are sand, charcoal, and gravel needs to be prepared. Then
, add the raw water
to this
prepared keg, and do not forget to protect it from any dusk by using a plastic lid covering. In the last
process before exporting, after the water
passes through the sand, charcoal, and gravel, this
pure liquid is going to be collected in the storage drum. Finally
, the manufacturer will transport these casks to a residential area or supermarket.Submitted by nine318 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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