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Not enough student around the world choose to study science subjects at the university. What are the reasons for this? What impact does this issue have on society? Give your reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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Nowadays, there is a declining number of
students
 to choose
science
subjects
 at the university. In
this
 essay, I will examine the key reasons behind the decreasing number of choosing
science
subjects
 and explain the impact on society.
To begin
 with, the main reason why pupils feel reluctant to choose
science
subjects
 is they feel bored. Many schools do not have appropriate teaching materials for
science
 classes.
Thus
,
students
 do not have a clear explanation of the material that they learned.,
However
,
this
 regular situation makes them feel bored and not have any interest in
science
 . For illustration, teachers only explain the life cycle without emphasizing every stage for the
students
.
As a result
,
students
 find that
science
subjects
 are hard to understand and they cannot stand that material.
Moreover
,
this
 situation can impact the society. It will bring negative impacts
such
 as there will be no improvement in many fields. Research will always related to
science
.
Nevertheless
, people can not do intensive research without having prior knowledge of
science
. For illustration, society can not improve the quality of their lives because there is slow improvement in some fields. It will be hard for people to understand the needs of the environment and its components as they do not have sufficient knowledge.
Consequently
, citizens will stuck in the current period of living with no improvement.
To sum up
, a decreasing number of youngsters opt for
science
subjects
 caused of the lack of teaching aid in the class that makes
science
 class boring.
Students
 will hate
science
 class.
Moreover
, it will make people hard to do some research because they do not have sufficient background knowledge.
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