Your friend has had his/her first book published a rently sent you a copy of that book. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, congratulate him/her for having his/her first book published thank your friend for sending you a copy of the book say what do you think about the book

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Dear Nancy, I hope

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letter finds you in good health and in high spirits. I am so glad about the recent launch of your new novel. I appreciate you for sending me

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first copy. I started reading your novel “The Hijack”as soon as I received the parcel. In spite of my busy schedule, I was hooked

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reading

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book , mainly because I loved the way

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you gave a detailed description

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the characters and

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suspicious roles they lead.

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, the suspense that was revealed in the end was definitely worth reading.

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, it had many plots and twists in the book ,

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was intact and meaningful. To sum it all up, In my opinion, the book cover, the suspense story and the narrative skills were all perfect. You have incredible writing skills and it was a moment of pride for me to read a novel written by my best friend.I wish more success to you. All the best, Jannet.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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6 paragraphs

169 words

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