The diagrams below show the chages that have taken place at West Park Secendary school since its construction in 1950

The diagrams below show the chages that have taken place at West Park Secendary school since its construction in 1950
The three different maps demonstrate the changes happening at West
Park
over a 60 period of time.
It is clear that
there are main differences among the three sites.
In particular
, these sites can be compared in terms of the
car
park
, playground and
sport
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field. Looking a the map in more detail, the hotel area of part was repleased by the
car
park
and science block. The southwest of West
Park
was occupied by farmland in 1950, which was converted into a
sport
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field in 1980. Over three decades the place of
sport
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field was halved, giving the space to a
car
park
.
Therefore
the space for the
car
park
was tripled in 2010 It could be explained by the fact that the playground for school children remained the same in 1950 and 1980,
whereas
the area was reduced a little bit in terms of size in 2010. The school turned into the main building in 1980, remaining the same in every perspective over the given time. No changes were observed in the science block after its construction.
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