Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is true that in some human's
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employers
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as doctors and engineers should
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in a country, where they
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and practice. Other
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think that workers should be free, and
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where they wish. In my ,opinion it will be good only in some aspects, but
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I will support the second view. One strong argument in favour of advantages is a comfortable place for the worker.
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means that employers will do
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that they did in the past, in training, and it is comfortable for them. American research showed that 40
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of workers in the world
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in places where they have studied. They do not
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change their locations because of afraid that they can not settle in a new place. ,
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if employees want to
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in peace of mind, the location will not be changed by them. There are several arguments why
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in another country is good.
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is of course
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. In other ,words if humans want to get a good
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they should change
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the statistics of 2022 year 45 percent of employees changed their location because of
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. The second argument is learning a new language and expanding one's worldview.
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who will go to another country will learn new languages and travel. Statistics showed that the other 15 per cent of
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want to travel by working. For ,that there are companies “
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and travel”. ,
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if someone wants to be free, learn a new language, or travel, these humans can do it by “
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and travel”.
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if
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do not
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take a low
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, they should go by second way. ,
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I recommend the American company “us.
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&travel” for improving employee’s worldview and
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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