A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: •tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves • say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her • explain how to apply for the job

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Dear James,

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wonderful to receive a letter from you. I hope you are doing great and In good health. Well, after receiving your letter, I indeed looked out for job vacancies that suit best for you. After looking out for weeks, I have found

marketing

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company in my home country India that deals in various kinds of luxury goods, and is looking

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to hire an employee who has experience in International Marketing and Finance. As you have completed your education in International Business, I believe

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job role will be suitable for you.

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to your knowledge and experience , your fluent

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speaking skills will

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will definitely help in utilizing your skills to the best capacity and give the organization a global

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. To grab

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opportunity at the earliest, log on to their official website , i.e. www.Realworld.com and go to the “ new Join” section to upload your resume. I hope , you grab

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offer and we can meet frequently in India. All the best, Rahil

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

179 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Many university students want to learn about different subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others feel it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for their qualification. discuss both of views and give your opinion.

Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Some people believe that watching TV is bad for children, while others claim is has positive effects for children as they grow up. Discuss both views and give your opinion.