A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: •tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves • say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her • explain how to apply for the job

#friend #job #country #company #•tell #sort #work

Dear James,

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wonderful to receive a letter from you. I hope you are doing great and In good health. Well, after receiving your letter, I indeed looked out for job vacancies that suit best for you. After looking out for weeks, I have found

marketing

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a marketing

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company in my home country India that deals in various kinds of luxury goods, and is looking

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apply

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to hire an employee who has experience in International Marketing and Finance. As you have completed your education in International Business, I believe

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job role will be suitable for you.

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to your knowledge and experience , your fluent

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speaking skills will

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will definitely help in utilizing your skills to the best capacity and give the organization a global

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. To grab

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opportunity at the earliest, log on to their official website , i.e. www.Realworld.com and go to the “ new Join” section to upload your resume. I hope , you grab

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offer and we can meet frequently in India. All the best, Rahil

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

179 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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