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*Some people prefer one-on-one lessons, while others prefer group lessons. Discuss both views and give your opinion.*

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Sometimes,
people
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 need extra
time
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 to learn outside the school. They are thinking that courses will give opportunities today. Some of them believe that private
class
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 or one-on-one
lesson
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 is better than group
class
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. There are positive and negative aspects to those classes. One-on-one
lesson
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 or private
class
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 usually only takes a teacher and one student.
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class
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 will fit with individual
people
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 because you do not have to meet anyone else.
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, it can be flexible when you choose the
time
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 for study. After that, you can ask everything you do not understand to your teacher without feeling embarrassed.
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,
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lesson
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 is usually more expensive than a group
lesson
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 because you must pay the teacher independently.
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, the group
lesson
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 can be chosen by
people
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 who do not have extra money.
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lesson
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 always takes more than one student in the
class
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. You can share and discuss your knowledge with others. Perhaps, you may create a better connection for working together outside the classroom. In
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class
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, you cannot pick flexible
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 so you have to manage your course with others. In conclusion, there are several aspects that make extra lessons good enough for your career. I think, one-on-one or private lessons should be chosen by
people
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 who do not have extra or limited
time
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. You can pick a flexible
time
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 when you are studying so you can fully concentrate on your study.
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, the
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 will give you several benefits,
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, communication and soft or hard skills in the future.
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