The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
The given diagram illustrates the process of producing electricity using geothermal energy. Normally, there are five steps related to the whole mechanism to generate heat
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It begins with cold aqua being pumped down 4.5 km from a storage area to the injection well. Linking Words
Then
, it goes through an underground geothermal zone which is compounded by hot rocks. Followed by it, the hot rocks encounter the cold water Linking Words
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heated by the hot rocks.
After that, the hot water passes the production well and it is pumped upward towards the condenser. In it, Linking Words
furthermore
, the hot water is steamed and condensed.
The steam plays a crucial role in the final step as it is associated with the turbine and generator motors. Linking Words
Moreover
, the turbine is powered by steam. Linking Words
For instance
, the generator is powered by the turbine so that producing electricity Linking Words
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Finally
, the heat is transferred to an electric tower which distributes it to the consumer.Linking Words
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