the bar chart below shows the percentage of australian men and m=women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 summarise the information

the bar chart below shows the percentage of australian men and m=women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 

summarise the information
The given bar chart provides information regarding the percentage of both Australian male and female individuals having physical activity in various
age
groups in 2010. It is noticeable to see that more women between the ages of 25 to 64 had physical activities than men their
age
,
while
these figures roughly crossed in their older ages (65 and over). 52.8% of young males from 15 to 24 worked out frequently, and as they grew older
this
figure decreased, reaching 39.5% at the
age
of 35 to 44.
However
, after the
age
of 45, their physical activities rose, and by the
age
of 45 to 54, 43.1% of them had regular physical activities.
Whereas
, only 47.7% of females aged 15 to 24 had constant physical activity, which was less than males, but
this
figure leveled up as they aged, and reached its highest point of 53.3% at the
age
of 45 to 54.
Additionally
,
this
figure fell from 55 and over.
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