Some people think that is a government should be responsible for improving public health. Others, however, believe that everyone in the community should take part in this issue. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Health

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The health

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sector

is a crucial situation that

need

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needs

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to be focused on and improved. Some

people

think that it is the

government

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government's

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duty to spend and improve

this

sector

, whilst others think that all the individuals of the society need to

particepate

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participate

in making the

health

sector

better. I think that enhancing

this

section is a burden that falls on both

government

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the government

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and

memebers

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members

of society. It is the

government

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government's

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onus to enhance the life of their

people

at

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in

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many aspects whether it

include

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includes

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; education, labour or

health

.

they

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They

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already collect taxes from the

people

,

that

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and that

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money

should be used to make medical services better and

avaliable

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available

.

For

example

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Canda

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Canada

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is one of the countries that

provides

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provide

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free medical insurance for

their

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its

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own population,

however

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in

return

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the

people

pays

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a huge sum of

money

for taxes.

On the other hand

, society members should

collabrate

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collaborate

to make the medical section enhanced. They already pay the taxes but

this

is not enough. They ought to collect

money

in

favor

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favour

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of a certain organisation that will be

commited

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committed

to improving the medical state of the population.

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, Egypt has created a

nation wide

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nationwide

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donation box dictated to

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all

the

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aspects of the living conditions in Egypt, any citizen can donate a certain amount of

money

to

this

box whether it is online or by a mobile phone message. In my opinion, it is a common duty for the

government

and the

people

to share in making the

health

sector

better.

this

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is because the

government

alone has a lot on

it's

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shoulders whether it is education, free housing or maintaining the infrastructure.

Moreover

, community

members

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members'

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role can't be underestimated.

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order to be an active member, you have to be

monetary

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involved and donate to your community. In conclusion, it can be reiterated that developing the healthcare system can't be done by the

government

or the individuals alone. It has to be a collaborative work between them.