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In some culture, children are being told that they can achieve anything if they work hard.What are advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

#culture #children #work #message
Youngsters have many ambitions.
To begin
 with, children mainly care about
profession
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professions
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 in childhood.
This
 is because they dream about ideal careers in the future, namely doctors, pilots, programmers and so on which highly demand either professional
skill
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skills
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 or
bachelor
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bachelor's
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 degrees.
Therefore
, children can earn huge amounts of money and accommodations. In my opinion,
i
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 think it’s just a part of their nature. It is because they want to not only pursue their dreams but
also
 achieve their aims. In fact, they want to be known for their
work
. Honestly, I think everyone has certain dreams. On the one hand, some people don’t concentrate on their dreams because of laziness and
lacking
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 adrenaline.
On the other hand
, others who can
scarified
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sacrifice
 their life to pursue their aims will become successful in the future. In my opinion, I widely believe that everyone does it in their own way. Making a
work
 or life balance is like shooting fish in a barrel because they understand how to manage time, when to destress from
work
 and how to take care of
them selves
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themselves
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. In fact, it is a healthy lifestyle to cope with stress and
work
 complications
as well as
 achieve
work
-life equilibrium.
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