Some people believe that arts (such as painting and music) do not improve people’s life therefore the government should not spend money on it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Numerous individuals argue that fine arts like visual arts and

music

do not enhance folk's life so the government ought not to spend money on it. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with the given statement and I will elaborate on it in

this

essay.

To begin

with, nowadays we can see a lot of

art

such

as paint,

music

and visual

art

. Some crowd’s like paint, and others like

music

.

Moreover

, sometimes

art

assists a patient who has a mental disease.

For example

,

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for a

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child who has a disease named ADHD, various studies show that as a treatment, watching the visual arts and listening to

music

is very effective for child patients.

Furthermore

,

art

can help children's mental development, and affect their creativity which leads to help find their talent and other abilities. So, it is good not only for youngster's mental advancement but

also

for children who have some diseases. In the same way,

music

is a good benefit for the population.

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famous singers sing about love or romance, most folks are moved by that song, which makes them close to nations who have the same interests.

Besides

,

music

has the power to the public's minds, so when they listen to

music

or movie OST, they can feel more comfortable and relaxed, which reduces their stress and makes them healthy.

For instance

, several studies show that if people have diseases like cancer, doctors recommend listening to

music

their favourites, and a few sufferer's cancer is reduced.

Therefore

, the government should spend on money

art

. In conclusion, I completely disagree with

this

topic. We continue to develop

art

because it can assist many people

as well as

heal. So, the government more invest in

art

and that will be good for our society.