THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE RESULT OF A SURVEY ABOUT PEOPLE'S COFFEE AND TEA BUYING AND DRINKING HABITS IN FIVE AUSTRAKIAN CITIES.

THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE RESULT OF A SURVEY ABOUT PEOPLE'S COFFEE AND TEA BUYING AND DRINKING HABITS IN FIVE AUSTRAKIAN CITIES.
The given chart illustrates a questionnaire result on the resident's
coffee
and tea buying
as well as
their drinking behaviour in five major
cities
of Australia, which are Sydney, Melbourne,
Brisbane
,
Adelaide
, and Hobart in the
last
4 weeks. Units are measured in percentage.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that buying instant
coffee
and going to a cafe for
coffee
or tea is the most preferable option in all
cities
. Meanwhile, buying fresh
coffee
has the lowest
demand
over the other two categories throughout the
cities
. In terms of fresh
coffee
, both Sydney and Melbourne started relatively the same at just above 40% compared to
Brisbane
and
Adelaide
which were about 10% lower.
However
, Hobart which stood at nearly 40% had more
demand
for instant
coffee
at roughly 52% and was the highest among other
cities
.
Similarly
,
Brisbane
had around the same proportion of
demand
for instant
coffee
followed by
Adelaide
at precisely 50% and the
last
two
cities
at around 45%. Regarding the option to go to a cafe for
coffee
or tea, Melbourne and Hobart both had more than 60% of customers and were in the highest
demand
of all categories. Sydney,
however
, contributed at just above 60% whilst
Brisbane
and
Adelaide
demanded approximately 55% and 49%, respectively.
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