THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE RESULT OF A SURVEY ABOUT PEOPLE'S COFFEE AND TEA BUYING AND DRINKING HABITS IN FIVE AUSTRAKIAN CITIES.

THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE RESULT OF A SURVEY ABOUT PEOPLE'S COFFEE AND TEA BUYING AND DRINKING HABITS IN FIVE AUSTRAKIAN CITIES.
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The given chart illustrates a questionnaire result on the resident's
coffee
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and tea buying
as well as
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their drinking behaviour in five major
cities
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of Australia, which are Sydney, Melbourne,
Brisbane
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,
Adelaide
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, and Hobart in the
last
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4 weeks. Units are measured in percentage.
Overall
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, it can clearly be seen that buying instant
coffee
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and going to a cafe for
coffee
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or tea is the most preferable option in all
cities
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. Meanwhile, buying fresh
coffee
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has the lowest
demand
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over the other two categories throughout the
cities
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. In terms of fresh
coffee
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, both Sydney and Melbourne started relatively the same at just above 40% compared to
Brisbane
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and
Adelaide
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which were about 10% lower.
However
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, Hobart which stood at nearly 40% had more
demand
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for instant
coffee
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at roughly 52% and was the highest among other
cities
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.
Similarly
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,
Brisbane
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had around the same proportion of
demand
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for instant
coffee
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followed by
Adelaide
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at precisely 50% and the
last
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two
cities
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at around 45%. Regarding the option to go to a cafe for
coffee
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or tea, Melbourne and Hobart both had more than 60% of customers and were in the highest
demand
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of all categories. Sydney,
however
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, contributed at just above 60% whilst
Brisbane
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and
Adelaide
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demanded approximately 55% and 49%, respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, cities, brisbane, adelaide, demand with synonyms.
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