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More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine. Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only part of the natural movement of workers around the world. Do you agree or disagree?

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One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that many intelligent individuals are changing their
citizenships
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 from poor to rich states to become
employee
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employees
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 in
job
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 in master areas like engineering, information technology and treatment. Some
people
 deem that by motivating
of
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such
population
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, well-developed
countries
 are getting illegal from underdeveloped nations. Others
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consider
that is
 just one side of the Personally, I tend to think that by encouraging rich
countries
 are gaining more well-educated
people
 from poor
countries
.
Firstly
, it is well-known that the era of globalisation offers more opportunities to whole
people
 and they have a chance to pick a residence
to
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 themselves. One of the main reasons behind
that is
 they can choose the convenient conditions for their sake and in most situations wealthy
countries
 can give appropriate possibilities. A good case in point is many African
people
 earning money in the United States of America and in Europe
countries
.
On the other hand
, it can
also
 be argued that the brain drain and migration are the result of caring the children.
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 the children of more qualified
people
 can attend many courses, ameliorate their knowledge and broaden
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horizon
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 about the world. Take
for
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 example, the kids of
afghans
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 in Canada
know
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 approximately two or three languages and demonstrate high literacy. In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account in our final analyses we can say that
although
 it
considered
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 as
the
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stealing, moving from poor to rich
countries
 is the key of the full of success and freedom of finance.
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