You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter •give details about the concert •describe how you won the tickets •explain why you’ve chosen your friend to go with you.

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Dear Shirley, I have thoroughly enjoyed exchanging letters with you these past couple of weeks and I am writing to invite you out to the August edition of the Primetime Concert. I feel like I owe it to you to describe what to expect at

this

Linking Words

concert so here goes.

Firstly

Linking Words

this

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month's edition features our favourite artist Brymo and will have him perform songs from his top three albums live with a full band.

Also

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, it is billed to be held at the historic Grand Square in Alabama. I had been looking forward to getting tickets to the show for quite a

while

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now. To my surprise,

while

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aimlessly scrolling through Instagram

last

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Wednesday, I stumbled upon a post from a random account promising to give out two free tickets if anyone could answer questions about previous editions of the festival. I answered all the questions correctly and won the tickets. You and I have exchanged correspondence all summer and I thought that

this

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presents a perfect opportunity for us to meet in person.

Furthermore

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, I invited you because you mentioned that it has been a lifelong dream to watch any of your best performers in person. I hope you are able to make it to

this

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event and I look forward to rocking with you. Yours sincerely, Frank

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

220 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

enthusiasm
eager
anticipation
once-in-a-lifetime
music genre
unforgettable experience
headlining
spectacular
venue
line-up
e-tickets
VIP access
social media giveaway
radio contest
camaraderie
bond over
tribute
nostalgia
cherish

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