One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is the part of computers in education system. It is undeniable that such gadgets have become an essential part of our life.
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computers
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system. It is undeniable that Add an article
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gadgets have become an essential part of our life
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However
, there is no absolute agreement on whether computers
should be provided in every classroom and used for teaching goals or not.
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Furthermore
, providing offspring with techniques and computers
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As a result
, they would suffer in the future due to
the lack of required skills, in other words
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On the other hand
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In addition
, the repair and maintenance of computers
cost money either. The explanation lies in the fact that it is more beneficial for some countries to use money in other fields. Therefore
, providing students with laptops is not always a good idea.
In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account I would argue that it is very important for young
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