One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is the part of computers in education system. It is undeniable that such gadgets have become an essential part of our life.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is the part of
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in
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system. It is undeniable that
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gadgets have become an essential part of our
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, there is no absolute agreement on whether
computers
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should be provided in every classroom and used for teaching goals or not. A commonly held belief is that
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plenty of useful functions for education processes that cannot be ignored. As evidence of
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they point to the advantage of
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pictures or
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. Teachers would have an opportunity to demonstrate visual examples of things that are related to
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or experiments
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could not be conducted in
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, providing offspring with techniques and
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would help them to follow modern tendencies and upgrade their skills
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using gadgets. It could be explained by the fact that there are students who
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not have an opportunity to buy one.
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, they would suffer in the future
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the lack of required skills,
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, using
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, from
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perspectives
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idea is quite expensive and many schools cannot provide their students with the aforementioned
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technologies.
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, they may mention that the total magnitude of money that
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to laptops
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more
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, the repair and maintenance of
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cost money either. The explanation lies in the fact that it is more beneficial for some countries to use money in other fields.
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, providing students with laptops is not always a good idea. In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account I would argue that it is very important for
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generation to learn the language of
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computers
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in schools and use them
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education
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purposes,
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,
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depends on its development level in
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