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Many people nowadays tend to marry and have children in their thirtiesrather than at younger age. Is this a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, more
people
 tend to start a family and be
parent
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parents
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 in their
thirties
.
This
 phenomenon is debatable whether positive or negative development on
overall
 society. In my opinion,
this
 is a largely positive development for two reasons. The first reason is about financial issues,
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 second one is related to
quality
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the quality
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 and understanding of family.
Firstly
, marrying and having children in
thirties
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their thirties
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 is
benefical
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beneficial
 for
people
due to
 financial reasons.
In
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 the age of
twenties
 most
people
 start
to
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their careers and at the
beginnings
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beginning
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 they hardy earn
high
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a high
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 amount of money, because of lack of experience and skills.
Consequently
, their salary could be
insuffucient
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insufficient
for keeping
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to keep
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 themselves and their family safe and comfortable.
Additionally
, in
the
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 early
careers
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people
 focus on their professional life and dedicate most of their time and effort toward business goals.
As a result
, they do not have enough time to afford
for
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family matters and for their children.
According to
 the research of
US
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the US
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 Agency, most
of
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the
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divorced families in the United States
Which
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Who
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 are in their
twenties
 are divorced
for
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because of
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 financial problems and difficulties. Another reason why
this
 is
positive
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a positive
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 tendency is that
people
 become more mature and understand the meaning of family in their
thirties
 than in their
twenties
. At
the
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younger ages,
people
 tend to be more unrealistic and
dreamer
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dreamers
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 because lack of experience.
Moreover
, to marry, build a strong family and raise children are things that
difficult
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are difficult
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 to handle and manage. When they reach to
thirties
 and
be
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become
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 more aware of life around them, they will start to possess certain
experience
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experiences
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 and qualities to build a family and be
parent
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parents
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. They will realize
responsibility
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the responsibility
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 of their household. There is a
reseach
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research
 conducted by an independent survey company. They interviewed
the
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apply
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elderly
people
 who
married
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were married
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 in their
twenties
. Most of the
spouse
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spouses
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 identified their
twenties
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as their
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their
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the
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 most challenging times
,
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apply
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 because they did not know much about marriage and being a parent. In conclusion, in my
opinion
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 the pattern of building a family in the
thirties
 is
benefical
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beneficial
,
due to
 financial and career issues and lack of clear knowledge about family
relationship
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relationships
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.
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