The chart below shows the percentage of the population in the UK who consumed the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables in 2002, 2006 and 2010.

The chart below shows the percentage of the population in the UK who consumed the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables in 2002, 2006 and 2010.
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The provided bar chart illustrates data on the proportion of different sorts of people consuming the number of fruits and
vegetables
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on a daily basis in England from the year 2002 to 2010, in a period of 8 years.
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, it can be seen that the people who were younger hated to eat healthy food more than adults.
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with, starting from 22% of men who lived in England eating fruit and
vegetables
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every day,
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figure had a marginal increase to the highest level over the next four-year period, with around 26%.
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, women who ate fruit and
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on a daily basis were 3% higher than men did, with nearly 25%,
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amount rose dramatically to reach a peak of 32% in 2006. Afterwards, a slight decline took place in the year 2006 to a low of 26%.
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, the pupils who were in England ate fewer
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than adults did, with a mere 11%.
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there was a considerable growth, of 7 percentage points,
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figure showed a downward trend for the next four years.
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