The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity
This
chart below demonstrates the percentage of British Correct determiner usage
The
people
donating money to charity
. The information is grouped in
five different age categories for each we witness two columns. The columns depicted in blue color belong to the data from 1990 and the orange columns are for data collected in 2010.
In both 1990 and 2010, there Change preposition
into
is
a Wrong verb form
was
raise
in donations until Correct your spelling
rise
Correct article usage
the middle
middle ages
and Correct your spelling
Middle Ages
then
, a small decrease in
the end. With that being said, little under a fifth of the population of 18 to Change preposition
at
25
Add a hyphen
25-year-olds
year
olds
donated money to charity
in 1990. Moreover
, it was raised to close to a third for 26 to 35 year
olds
and to almost a half in
36 to 50 Change preposition
for
year
olds
in 1990. Finally
, it experienced a small decrease in people
over 50 years
old.
Similarly
in 2010, the youngest group gives
the least to the charities and Wrong verb form
gave
then
, the donations trend
Wrong verb form
trended
upwards
until the group of 51 to Correct your spelling
upward
65
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65-year-olds
year
olds
almost half of whom donate
to the Wrong verb form
donated
charity
. Furthermore
, a bit over a third of the folk over 65 years
old donate to charities.
To conclude
, the trends in the share of people
donating to the
charities are the same in 1990 and 2010. But, Correct article usage
apply
less
Change the quantifier
fewer
people
under 50 years
old donated money to charity
in 2010 than they did in 1990 and the opposite is true for the
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apply
people
over 50 years
old.Submitted by a.ansari3103 on
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