The chart below shows the results of a survey into the causes of poor school attendance in the UK in 2007.
The given pie chart represents the percentage of the particular reasons which led to the poor school attendance of students in the UK in 2007.
Overall
, both the parents working is a major reason which leads to this
situation and upbringing holding the least percentage. Apart from those, the other three causes include peer group pressure, bullying and lack of school discipline.
Firstly
, the 40% figure that gives rise to this
issue is because the caretakers are busy individuals which leads to a lack of attention on their child, translating to a lack of strong attendance. On the other hand
, the second largest contributor is not having a solid school discipline which accounts for the other 25%.
The remaining 35% is occupied by the remaining factors; with peer pressure and bullying having similar figures which are 15%. Lastly
, upbringing which is the lowest stands at 5%.Submitted by patelharnish38 on
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