the chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. the table shows the salaries of theanthropologists in work after five years.
The pie chart illustrates the proportion of what college
students
do after they graduate from university and the table below shows the salaries percentage that they will get after they have worked for 5 years.
In summary, the main proportion of students
will do Full-time work
and 5 years later, if they work
as Freelance consultants or Government sector, the percentage that they will get salaries more than $100,000 are
more than 40%.
Focusing on the pie graph, most Change the verb form
is
of
anthropologist Change preposition
apply
students
will do the
Full-time Correct article usage
apply
work
, following that, there are 2 destinations that students
choose almost the same which are Part-time work
with 15% also
Unemployed 12%. There are 2 8% work
that they choose to work
which are Full-time postgrad study and Not known. Moreover
, the least destination that they choose is Part-time work
+ postgrad study.
For the table, there are 3 types of careers which are Freelance consultants, Government sector, and Private companies. The number of anthropologists in both Freelance consultants and Government
sector Correct article usage
the Government
tend
to have high salaries (more than 75,000) with 80% in total of each group. Change the verb form
tends
Also
, there are the same number in %50,000-74,999 range on these 2 groups by 15% and 5% on $25,000-49,999. Nevertheless
, the number of Private companies is not as good as the other 2 careers that
most of them (35%) get only $50,000-74,999 and only 30% get more than $100,000.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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