You saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity event. Write a letter of application to the organizers. In your letter: -explain why you are interested in helping -Give details suitable past experience -suggest ways you might help with the event.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter with regards to the advert that I saw, "Volunteering camp in the Charles Elders home", in the Sunday Observer, 24th September 2022. I am interested in participating in the event of helping grandparents at Charles Elders' home. Over the years I have been an active member of the Lion's Club, especially during events like these.

In addition

, I love working with adults since it gives me a lot of pleasure. Let me provide you with some details of my past experiences working with adults. As I mentioned above, I have been an active member of the Lion's Club for 10 years now, and I have enough experience doing similar projects with them.

Moreover

, I have my grandmother at home, so, I not only know how to work with them, but

also

I have a good understanding of their feelings.

Finally

, I am good at cooking and giving baths to the elders.

Last

but not least, I am good at singing, I can sing songs from the 70s, my grandparents love those very much. I hope these skills will be useful to the event. If you need more information, please contact me on my mobile, and I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Supun

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task response

Ensure to address all the points specified in the task. In this letter, you have effectively explained why you are interested in helping, given details of past experiences, and suggested ways you might help with the event. However, be sure to address any specific requirements or qualifications outlined in the advert.

coherence and cohesion

The logical structure of the letter is generally clear, but the greeting and closing could be more formal and appropriately addressed. Consider using formal salutations such as 'Dear Organizers' or 'Yours faithfully' to maintain a professional tone throughout the letter.

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

214 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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