Some people claims that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Recycling has long been a popular practice that
people
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who care about the environment follow and implement in their daily
life
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. Recycling is a term to convey the action of making use of the things which have already been used. Not only does
this
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action contribute to our effort
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the environment but it
also
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is a great ally in our fight against
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recession in short,
save
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us a lot of money. But from some
people
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’s perspectives, the amount of waste being recycled is still insufficient and we would need to go as far as to make legal conditions to force
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to recycle.
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I partly agree with
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opinion, I think more details on the
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and
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should be added here to make it
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practical. There are two reasons to back up my opinion.
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are needed to bring some visible
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;
second,
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should focus more on
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industrial corporations rather than
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. So first thing
first,
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definitely called for because as we all know, our living environment
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in a critical condition, and the awareness of the
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on
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matter is adequate. But reality has shown us that even though everyone is aware of it, not everyone
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it as they think it’s not their problem. And to deal with
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like that, we need to take legal
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and show them the seriousness of the situation. Not only does
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help us save our planet, it
save
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us a bundle of money. Waste to
this
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person could be gold to another. Even if we don’t have a use for an object, someone else may
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recycle are
needed
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and a lawsuit to back it up
are
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necessary too.
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instance, the agricultural use for the root, the body of a plant is often limited but it would help a lot in
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generation process. So it’s clear that legal actions are necessary to make recycling work, how we should discuss
about
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the extent it is applied the right target that we should aim for is the big industrial corporation as they’re accounted for the most
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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