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In some countries there are not enough recycling of waste materials (eg. Paper, glass and cans). What are the reasons and solutions?

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In recent years, the phenomenon of encouraging
people
 to recycle disposable
materials
 is happening constantly in some nations
such
 as paper, glass and cans.
However
, some countries still need to make more endeavours. As for the first point, there are numerous arguments related to why
people
 do not desire to collect unusable items and
delivery
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 them to recycling centres, including misunderstanding purposes and the process of reproducing the waste
materials
, or they just do not know the item can be recycled.
For example
, my cousin had been taught only to litter paper into recycle bins since he was a primary student.
Nevertheless
, after two decades, the government provides more kinds of stuff that can be reprocessed in order to reproduce new products.
In addition
, formulating attractive recycling policies and education by governments may be able to enhance
people
's ambition to save more rubbish.
For instance
, if pupils can learn the categories and methods for how to distinguish trash into different
materials
, and if the local bureaus could inspire
people
 and manufactories to recycle impractical items to earn much cash via vivid advertisements or texts which might promote a higher proportion of recycling. In conclusion, we can say that the government has been doing their best for all citizens, even though, some
people
 refuse to comply with policies which is quite alarming. From my perspective,
although
 it is a sophisticated subject, I regard that individuals and factories should be encouraged and do recycle spontaneously
for
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waste
materials
 which not only provides us with a delightful environment but
also
 promotes our standard of living in the foreseeable future.
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