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Write a letter to the manager of a hotel where you stayed and left two things. Give details of your stay Why those 2 things ar important How he can return

#manager #hotel #two #ar
Hello Sir/Madam My self Mark Zone and I have booked your amazing
hotel
 for 3 days, from 14 August to 16 August to attend one important meeting in Canada. My room number was Z7836 and I booked the
hotel
 via your website. The meeting with the client in the
last
 days took longer time than usual and I booked the flight on the same day so in a hurry, I left my laptop and a small bag in your
hotel
. My laptop has an important document for my business and it has some paramount files and documents for my client and billing details and I do not want to misplace that data. And in the bag, I have put one hard disk and one memory cheap storage in which I have stored my some personal data and memory so it is very important for me to get it safely from your side. I request you to please send two important things laptop and begs via speedpost I have attached my address in
this
 letter and
also
 as I have booked your
hotel
 online you can easily find my address in your database. I will pay the speed post fees do not take stress for it I will handle the cost of courier services. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, SARA
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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