The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source Australia nad France in 1980 and 2000.
The
pie
charts illustrate the units
of electricity
production by fuel
source from 2 different countries, Australia
and France
in the years 1980 and 2000.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the units
of electricity
in 2000 of 2 countries were larger compared to the 1980.
Australia
in 1980 have
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units
of coal, which took half of the pie
chart
, natural gas
and hydropower were approximately to each other with 20 units
, oil
being used the least in the electricity
fuel
with only 10 units
, lead
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of electricity
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France
, in 1980, coal and natural gas
have the same used with 20 units
equal, followed by oil
with less than 5 units
, nuclear power had 15 units
in the pie
chart
, and with only 5 units
left, belonged to
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hydro power
, the total of Correct your spelling
hydropower
fuel
that used in France
was 90 units
, which was lower compared to Australia
.
In 2000, due to
the need for fuel
was
being increased, the figures show that there was some peak in the Unnecessary verb
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units
. Suprisingly, with 130 units
, took 3/4 of the pie
chart
, coal became the most used fuel
in Australia
, hydropower had 36 units
, and with only 2 units
from each fuel
, natural gas
and oil
, a total of the fuels being used in 2000 from Australia
was increased to 170 units
. If Australia
used coal the most, so in France
, nuclear power was commonly used with 126 units
, which took more than half of the pie
chart
, coal and oil
have the same amount of consumption with 25 units
, hydropower and natural gas
being used the least with only 2 units
for each fuel
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