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Some people think that there will be an increased dependence on intelligent robots in the future. Others think that robots will have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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These days, artificial intelligence has taken over all aspects of human life and no one can deny its effects on societies. It is suggested that we will witness an increased dependence on intelligent
robots
 in the future. Some argue that
robots
 are a threat to society. I think that dependence on
robots
 certainly will be increased and
although
 artificial intelligence has both pros and cons, its pros outweigh its cons. Recently,
due to
 the advancement in technology, intelligent
robots
 have changed individuals' lifestyles and more and more
people
 have become dependent on
robots
 for their fulfilment and they feel paralyzed in the absence of AI.
Robots
 have created the verse of human intelligence and
as a result
, they can do some tasks
instead
 of
people
. Since
robots
 are designed a complete the analysis of data, they act flawlessly. In fact,
robots
 decrease the probability of human errors or failure in the systems,
therefore
, a large number of
people
 prefer to use them.
On the other hand
, there are some opponents of AI who believe that
robots
 will have harmful effects on society.
In particular
, they think that
robots
 will decline humanity.
Robots
 act logically and emotional factors are not involved,
consequently
, human principles will be questioned.
In addition
, some are worried about the power of AI which is increasing and may threaten human life in the future.
For instance
, some powerful
robots
 may be invented that
people
 will not be able to control.
As a result
, they will destroy human life with interaction in their lives.
To conclude
, in the future dependence on intelligent
robots
 will increase and it may be a threat to society but I believe its advantages outweigh its disadvantages and to prevent their threats,
people
 should be conscious of designing them.
Submitted by mhshid on

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