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Some people think that there will be an increased dependence on intelligent robots in the future. Others think that robots will have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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These days, artificial intelligence has taken over all aspects of human life and no one can deny its effects on societies. It is suggested that we will witness an increased dependence on intelligent
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 in the future. Some argue that
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 are a threat to society. I think that dependence on
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 certainly will be increased and
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 artificial intelligence has both pros and cons, its pros outweigh its cons. Recently,
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 the advancement in technology, intelligent
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 have changed individuals' lifestyles and more and more
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 have become dependent on
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 for their fulfilment and they feel paralyzed in the absence of AI.
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 have created the verse of human intelligence and
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, they can do some tasks
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 of
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. Since
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 are designed a complete the analysis of data, they act flawlessly. In fact,
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 decrease the probability of human errors or failure in the systems,
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, a large number of
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 prefer to use them.
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, there are some opponents of AI who believe that
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 will have harmful effects on society.
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, they think that
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 will decline humanity.
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 act logically and emotional factors are not involved,
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, human principles will be questioned.
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, some are worried about the power of AI which is increasing and may threaten human life in the future.
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, some powerful
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 may be invented that
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 will not be able to control.
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, they will destroy human life with interaction in their lives.
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, in the future dependence on intelligent
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 will increase and it may be a threat to society but I believe its advantages outweigh its disadvantages and to prevent their threats,
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 should be conscious of designing them.
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