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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?

#people #history #school #subjects #today’s #world #science #technology
Previously, in the
time
 of our ancestors,
their
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 used to be very less teachings on science and invention.
However
, nowadays we observe with the increase in
technology
 a lot of schools are focusing less on
history
 and more
of
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 technical subjects. Looking at
this
 change, some people are satisfied,
while
 some of them are against
this
 and
says
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history
shall
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 be given more importance. In
this
 essay, I will explain why subjects like
technology
 and science shouldn’t be ignored and given more superiority over
history
.
To begin
 with, we know that
technology
 is on boom these days and the
time
 is not far away when robots will
takeover
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 humans. So, to stay relevant and up to date with
upcoming
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 future we should make sure that every individual has
empathy
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an empathy
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 amount of technological knowledge.
For instance
, the new booming AI, called Chat GPT has almost
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 over many social media platforms are it provides
interacting
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 with
real life
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 robot and answer all our queries in
few
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 seconds.
Furthermore
, subjects like
history
 cannot be ignored.
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,
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history
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 tells us
how
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that
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 various facilities were invented in our
elders
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time
 without having
internet
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.
For example
, the pyramids,
a
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mystery
that is
 still not solved. With the number of technologies we are occupied with we still cannot make a unique and big infrastructure like it. So, how come the Egyptians made it possible in their
time
 with
negligible
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 amount of
technology
.
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 To get answers to these questions we should give importance to
history
 as well.
Although
,
history
 is studied deeply.
Nevertheless
, we should not reduce our focus on
technology
 and science and always make sure we give it more importance,
reason
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 being, the more innovations we will have the more it will be easy for us to analyze our
history
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural heritage
  • Historical perspective
  • Analytical skills
  • Contextual understanding
  • Technological advancements
  • STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, Mathematics)
  • Innovation
  • Interdisciplinary
  • Job market
  • Climate crisis
  • Cultural identity
  • Critical thinking
  • Humanities
  • Contemporary issues
  • Integration
  • Tech-savvy
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