The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.
The bar chart illustrates the information about how many metric
tonnes
of pineapple
were sold to foreign countries in the word
by leading exporters in Correct your spelling
world
this
field, while
the pie chart shows the details of various cost
of every single Fix the agreement mistake
costs
pineapple
consumed in 2019.
overall
, Capitalize word
Overall
it is clear that
the
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country
B deliveried
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delivered
pineapple
to other countries Fix the agreement mistake
pineapples
was
highest in 2009, Unnecessary verb
apply
whereas
the number of pineapple
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pineapples
was
exported by Unnecessary verb
apply
the
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country
A reached a peak in 2019. The cost for distribution and retail made up the highest proportion of each pineapple
consumed.
in 2009, the number of pineapple
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pineapples
was
sold to other countries by Unnecessary verb
apply
country
B accounted for the highest figure
some 5 in million tonnes
, in start
contrast to Correct your spelling
stark
the
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apply
country
C, which was nearly at
0 metric Change preposition
apply
tonnes
. In a
decade later, the Change preposition
A
country
was tookover
as B to leading in Correct your spelling
taken over
this
sector with the figure
reaching a peak of above 10 metric tonnes
in millions, while
the
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country
C maintain
its level with just approximately 1 metric Wrong verb form
maintained
tonnes
.
The vast majority of the cost for each pineapple
was distribution and retail, which was
made up the largest percentage about 35%, which was nearly double that of profit. Following that, the Unnecessary verb
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figure
for export costs and international transport were 16% and 12%, respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
figures
By contrast
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and taxes accounted for Fix the agreement mistake
producers
a
lowest proportion, with the Change the article
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figure
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tonnes, pineapple, country, figure with synonyms.
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