The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.

The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.
The bar chart illustrates the information about how many metric
tonnes
of
pineapple
were sold to foreign countries in the
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by leading exporters in
this
field,
while
the pie chart shows the details of various
cost
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of every single
pineapple
consumed in 2019.
overall
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,
it is clear that
the
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country
B
deliveried
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delivered
pineapple
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pineapples
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to other countries
was
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highest in 2009,
whereas
the number of
pineapple
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pineapples
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was
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exported by
the
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country
A reached a peak in 2019. The cost for distribution and retail made up the highest proportion of each
pineapple
consumed. in 2009, the number of
pineapple
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pineapples
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was
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sold to other countries by
country
B accounted for the highest
figure
some 5 in million
tonnes
, in
start
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contrast to
the
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country
C, which was nearly
at
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0 metric
tonnes
.
In a
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decade later, the
country
was
tookover
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taken over
as B to leading in
this
sector with the
figure
reaching a peak of above 10 metric
tonnes
in millions,
while
the
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country
C
maintain
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its level with just approximately 1 metric
tonnes
. The vast majority of the cost for each
pineapple
was distribution and retail, which
was
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made up the largest percentage about 35%, which was nearly double that of profit. Following that, the
figure
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figures
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for export costs and international transport were 16% and 12%, respectively.
By contrast
, the data for
producer
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producers
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and taxes accounted for
a
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lowest proportion, with the
figure
standing at below 5%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words tonnes, pineapple, country, figure with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • dominant
  • emerging trends
  • production costs
  • transportation
  • retailer markup
  • global trade dynamics
  • sustainability
  • market demand
  • economic factors
  • export volumes
  • logistic costs
  • retail price
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