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The plans below show how the ground floor of a particular building has changed over time. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The plan depicts the ground floor of a specific building and how it developed throughout three distinct time periods.
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, the most significant modification is that the
office
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 facilities were changed for domestic purposes as the building was transformed into an apartment and
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 repurposed a second time to serve as a flower shop. In terms of layout, only the kitchen remained unchanged over the years. On the left side, when the building functioned as an
office
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, the meeting room and assistant’s area were located in the top-left corner. In the period from 1985 to 2000, the original plan was replaced by a living room and
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subsequently
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 a gift card and flower space has been there from 2001 to the present.
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, the secretary’s studio and toilet from the initial layout were demolished to make way for a bathroom when the building was used as an apartment. Now, a small play square has been constructed in
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 place. On the right side, two bedrooms were added at the expense of the manager’s
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 and the reception area as the
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 building was converted into an apartment. They were
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 removed to allow for an
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 and a second flower area in the florist’s shop.
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, the kitchen is the only room that remained unchanged over all three iterations of the building’s ground floor.
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