Talk about your favorite social media site or application You should say: when you first used it why you use it how often you use it and if you recommend it to others

While
many people have switched to TikTok, Instagram remains my favourite social network for a variety of reasons. I started using it full-time and out of professional interest 3 years ago and found it to be an app that allows me to express myself creatively. Over the years, I have accumulated a fairly large number of subscribers, but I would definitely not call myself an influencer. When the war started, I stopped using the app for work purposes. But every day I want to get back to that rhythm, shoot useful videos, and share my life, and what I'
ve
achieved since I'
ve
been away. But still, something constantly stops me, especially after reading the news from Ukraine and
then
I think, '
This
is not the right time. I still really enjoy using Instagram and I would definitely recommend it to others if you want to develop creatively or start your own online business. By the way, there are a lot of online professions that are in high demand in the Instagram space. But you need to have a thick skin if you are going to get a large number of followers. I'
ve
heard from other people that they get derogatory comments, which can be frustrating, but luckily you can easily block them. I'
ve
been lucky so far, but some people I know have been victims of catfishing, which can be traumatic.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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